Business card feedback

I'm working on an personal card that I can hand out on my journey. I've posted my first few concepts on my smugmug account. Won't you please scoot on over and tell me what you think? Hell, maybe even the basic idea is artistically flawed and you could provide some scathing critiscism.

Hmm... now that I think about it, I hope the whole thing doesn't come off like a Successory. I hate those things. I can't believe I just linked to Successories. Ugh. I have to go shower now.